Basic 4 · Ghanaian Language · Creative and Free Writing

Writing a Story About a Past Event

In this topic you will write a one-paragraph story describing a past event.

By the end of these notes you should be able to:

  • Plan a story about a past event
  • Write a paragraph using past tense and time words
  • Check and improve your paragraph

What you already know

  • Punctuation in narrative writing

Copy everything that has a blue line on its left into your notebook. The other parts are for reading.

Strand
Composition Writing
Sub-strand
Creative and Free Writing
Indicator
B4.4.2.1.1-2 – Write a one paragraph story describing a past event

Introduction

Think about a special day: a visit to the market, a festival, or a family celebration. You can write about it in one clear paragraph.

1. Planning

Planning questions
QuestionExample answer
What happened?I went to the market
When?last Saturday
Who was there?my mother and I
What did you see and do?we bought yams and fish; it was busy
How did you feel?happy and tired

2. A Model Paragraph

"Last Saturday, my mother and I went to Kejetia Market in Kumasi. The market was very busy and noisy. We bought yams, fish and tomatoes. My mother bargained with the sellers. In the evening, we went home tired but happy."

A busy view of Kejetia Market in Kumasi
Figure 1: Kejetia Market Draw a place you visited.Photo: Afus199620, CC0, via Wikimedia Commons

3. Time Words

first, then, next, after that, later, finally, in the evening

4. Checking

  • Did I use the past tense?
  • Did I use capital letters and punctuation?
  • Are my events in order?

New words

paragraph
A group of sentences about one idea.
past event
Something that already happened.
time words
Words that show order, like first and then.
bargain
To discuss a lower price.
draft
A first version of writing.
edit
To check and correct writing.

Summary

  • Plan your story with who, what, when and how.
  • Write one paragraph in the past tense.
  • Use time words to show order.
  • Check and edit your work.

Class activity: My Past Event

  1. Look at the photographs of a local market or festival.
  2. Plan and write a paragraph about a past event in your Ghanaian language.
  3. Swap with a partner to check punctuation.

You need: Printed photographs of a local market or festival, Locally made story-planning cards, Exercise books, Pencils

Exercises

Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.

  1. 1. A group of sentences about one idea is a…

    • A. Paragraph
    • B. Word
    • C. Letter
    • D. Song
    Show answer
    Answer: ParagraphThat is a paragraph.
  2. 2. Which is a time word?

    • A. Finally
    • B. Yellow
    • C. Chair
    • D. Happy
    Show answer
    Answer: FinallyIt shows order.
  3. 3. Which sentence is in the past tense?

    • A. We bought yams.
    • B. We buy yams.
    • C. We will buy yams.
    • D. We are buying yams.
    Show answer
    Answer: We bought yams.Bought is past tense.
  4. 4. A story about a past event uses the past tense.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: TrueIt already happened.
  5. 5. Time words make the order of events unclear.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: FalseThey make order clear.
  6. 6. To discuss a lower price is to ______.

    Show answer
    Answer: bargainShoppers bargain.
  7. 7. Write the first sentence of a story about a festival.

    Show answer
    Answer: E.g. Last year, I attended the Homowo festival in Accra.Use the past tense.
  8. 8. Why should you check your paragraph after writing?

    Show answer
    Answer: To correct mistakes in tense, spelling and punctuation and improve clarity.Editing improves writing.

Homework

  1. Write a paragraph about a past event in your family.