Basic 9 · English Language

Discussing National Issues, Summary Skills, Hyphens in Use, Describing Settings and Flashback

In this topic you will discuss national and global issues, critically analyse and summarise texts, use hyphens in your writing, describe settings and moods and analyse how events are ordered across texts.

By the end of these notes you should be able to:

  • Discuss national and global issues with open-ended questions
  • Analyse and summarise a text
  • Use hyphens accurately in writing
  • Write effective descriptions of settings
  • Analyse the order of events in texts

What you already know

  • Summaries
  • Hyphens

Copy everything that has a blue line on its left into your notebook. The other parts are for reading.

Lesson 1

Strand
Oral Language
Sub-strand
Conversation
Indicator
B9.1.1.1.3 – Use appropriate language and open-ended questions to discuss grade-level national and global issues

Introduction

Galamsey, climate change, unemployment: these are big issues, and they will shape your future. You have a right and a duty to discuss them.

1. Open-Ended Questions

Open-ended question: A question that cannot be answered with yes or no.

Closed and open questions
ClosedOpen-ended
Is galamsey bad?How does galamsey affect communities?
Do you like solar energy?What would make solar energy more popular?
Should we pay tax?Why is paying tax important?

Open-ended questions invite thinking and explanation. They usually begin with how, why, what if or in what ways. Use them when you want to learn someone's views, and to move a discussion on from simple agreement or disagreement.

2. National and Global Issues

Issues to discuss
LevelIssueQuestion
nationalyouth unemploymentHow can more jobs be created?
nationalillegal miningWho is responsible for stopping it?
nationaleducation qualityWhat should improve first?
globalclimate changeHow should rich and poor countries share the burden?
globalmigrationWhy do young Africans risk their lives to travel?
globalartificial intelligenceHow should AI be used fairly?

3. Language for Discussing Issues

Useful language
PurposePhrases
giving your viewIn my opinion, From my perspective
citing evidenceAccording to..., Reports show that...
agreeingI agree, and I would add that...
disagreeingI understand, but...
qualifyingIn some cases, It depends on...

Avoid exaggeration such as "Everyone knows" or "All politicians are thieves". Be careful about facts, and name your sources. On sensitive matters, such as politics, religion or ethnicity, speak with care. Attack ideas, not people or groups.

Young people at a climate discussion
Figure 1: Youth climate discussion Write three open-ended questions on one issue.

4. Getting Informed

To discuss an issue well, you need to know about it. Read newspapers and reliable websites, and listen to the news. Note down facts, including dates and names. Look at more than one point of view. On galamsey, for instance, listen to the views of chiefs, miners, farmers and government. Being informed makes you a stronger speaker, and a better citizen. The issues that you discuss today are those that your generation will have to solve.

New words

open-ended question
A question requiring explanation.
issue
A matter of public concern.
exaggeration
Saying more than is true.

Summary

  • Open-ended questions invite deeper discussion.
  • Discuss issues using facts, respect and careful language.

Class activity: Issue Circle

  1. Choose a national issue.
  2. Prepare three open-ended questions.
  3. Discuss them and report your conclusions.

You need: Ghanaian newspaper, Printed discussion-topic cards, Chalkboard, Chalk

Exercises

Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.

  1. 1. Which is open-ended?

    • A. How can we reduce plastic waste?
    • B. Is plastic bad?
    • C. Do you recycle?
    • D. Are bins green?
    Show answer
    Answer: How can we reduce plastic waste?Explanation.
  2. 2. Facts should be checked before discussing an issue.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: TrueAccuracy.
  3. 3. Saying more than is true is ______.

    Show answer
    Answer: exaggerationLanguage.
  4. 4. Change to open-ended: "Is unemployment a problem?"

    Show answer
    Answer: How does unemployment affect young people in Ghana?Question.

Lesson 2

Strand
Reading
Sub-strand
Summarizing
Indicator
B9.2.2.1.1 – Analyze critically a given text in entirety and provide an objective summary

Introduction

Before you summarise a text, you must understand how it works. Critical reading goes beneath the surface.

1. Reading Critically

Questions for critical reading
QuestionPurpose
What is the main claim?finds the central idea
What reasons are given?identifies support
What evidence is used?checks strength
What is left out?spots gaps
What is the writer's purpose?identifies intention
Is the tone fair?detects bias

2. Reading Passage: Should We Pay for Plastic Bags?

Every day, Ghanaians use millions of thin plastic bags. Most are used for just a few minutes, and then they are thrown away, where they remain for hundreds of years. They choke gutters, kill animals and fill our beaches. Some countries, including Rwanda and Kenya, have banned them altogether, and their streets are visibly cleaner.

Critics argue that a ban would hurt the thousands of Ghanaians who work in the sachet and plastics business. They have a point. However, jobs need not vanish. Factories could make paper bags, and new jobs could arise in recycling. A small charge for each bag would encourage shoppers to reuse them, and it would raise money for clean-up. The real question is not whether we can afford to act, but whether we can afford not to.

3. Analysing the Passage

Analysis
FeatureFinding
main claimGhana should act to reduce plastic bags.
evidenceRwanda and Kenya, harm to gutters and animals
opposing viewjob losses
answernew jobs in paper bags and recycling
techniquea strong closing question

The writer's aim is to persuade. The tone is firm, but the writer accepts that critics "have a point", which makes the argument seem fair. The final sentence is memorable because it turns the problem around.

Plastic waste on a beach in Ghana
Figure 2: Plastic on the beach Write your own view on a plastic bag charge.

4. Summary

A model summary: Plastic bags are used briefly but cause lasting pollution, and some countries have banned them. The writer accepts that jobs may be at risk, but suggests paper bags, recycling and a small charge as solutions.

This summary keeps the claim and the key reasons, and adds no personal opinion. It also uses the writer's balance of argument and answer. In a critical analysis, you would go further, and comment on how well the writer has made the case. Keep these two tasks separate. A summary reports, and an analysis judges.

New words

claim
A statement that something is true.
bias
Unfair favour for one side.
persuade
To convince someone.

Summary

  • Critical reading examines claims, evidence and purpose.
  • A summary reports, and an analysis judges.

Exercises

Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.

  1. 1. The writer's aim is to…

    • A. persuade
    • B. entertain only
    • C. sell bags
    • D. describe a beach
    Show answer
    Answer: persuadePurpose.
  2. 2. The writer ignores the opposing view.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: FalseCritics "have a point".
  3. 3. Unfair favour for one side is ______.

    Show answer
    Answer: biasTerm.
  4. 4. Name two solutions the writer suggests.

    Show answer
    Answer: Paper bags and a small charge for each bag.Passage.

Lesson 3

Strand
Grammar
Sub-strand
Punctuation
Indicator
B9.3.2.1.1 – Identify and use punctuation marks (hyphen) in context

Introduction

You now know the rules for the hyphen. In this lesson, you will practise using it accurately in your own writing.

1. Reviewing the Rules

Hyphen review
RuleCorrectIncorrect
compound adjectivea part-time joba part time job
numberthirty-fivethirty five
agea ten-year-old girla ten years old girl
prefix with a capitalpre-IndependencepreIndependence
ex- prefixex-ministerexminister
re- to avoid confusionre-sign the formresign the form

2. Hyphens and Meaning

How hyphens change meaning
WithoutWith
small business owners (business owners who are small)small-business owners (owners of small businesses)
I resent the letter. (I am angry about it.)I re-sent the letter. (I sent it again.)
twenty odd people (strange people)twenty-odd people (about twenty people)

In examples like these, a hyphen is needed for clarity. Although modern English uses fewer hyphens than in the past, they still matter wherever a reader might be confused. Good writers think about their reader.

3. Hyphens in Dates, Numbers and Phrases

Use hyphens in fractions used as adjectives ("a two-thirds majority"), and in compound numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine. A larger number takes a hyphen only in its last part, as in "one hundred and twenty-two". In a range of numbers, an en dash or the word "to" is used: 1957–1966, or "from 1957 to 1966". Some phrases take hyphens only as adjectives: "a state-of-the-art computer", but "the computer is state of the art".

Editing

Correct: "The well known author wrote a two hundred page book for six year old children."

  1. "well known" comes before a noun, so hyphenate it.
  2. "two hundred page" describes the book.
  3. "six year old" describes children.

Answer: The well-known author wrote a two-hundred-page book for six-year-old children.

A student proofreading with a red pen
Figure 3: Proofreading Edit a paragraph for hyphens.

4. Proofreading

Check for hyphens as part of your proofreading. Look at groups of words before nouns, and ask whether they work as a single idea. Do not add hyphens after "-ly" words, or between ordinary adjectives such as "a big, red bus". Use a dictionary if you are unsure. Punctuation may look like a small thing, but careful punctuation tells an examiner that you are a careful thinker.

New words

proofreading
Checking writing for errors.
clarity
Being easy to understand.
majority
More than half.

Summary

  • Hyphens prevent confusion and join words that act as one.
  • Proofread for hyphens before finishing your work.

Exercises

Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.

  1. 1. Which is correct?

    • A. a six-year-old child
    • B. a six years old child
    • C. a six-years-old child
    • D. a six year-old-child
    Show answer
    Answer: a six-year-old childCompound adjective.
  2. 2. "Newly-built" needs a hyphen.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: False"-ly" words do not.
  3. 3. Checking writing for errors is ______.

    Show answer
    Answer: proofreadingEditing.
  4. 4. Explain the difference between "resent" and "re-sent".

    Show answer
    Answer: "Resent" means to feel angry about, and "re-sent" means to send again.Meaning.

Lesson 4

Strand
Writing
Sub-strand
Descriptive Writing
Indicator
B9.4.2.1.1 – Create effective descriptive sentences when describing characters settings or mood

Introduction

The setting of a story is more than a background. It can make a reader feel afraid, joyful or homesick.

1. What Is Setting?

Setting: The time and place in which a story happens.

Setting includes the place, the time of day, the season and the period in history. A scene set in a Harmattan morning in Bolgatanga feels very different from one in the rain in Takoradi. Choose details that serve your story. You do not need to describe everything. Pick out a few striking features, and let the reader's imagination do the rest.

2. Organising a Description

Ways of organising description
MethodExample
near to farthe mat, the yard, the distant hills
top to bottomthe sky, the roof, the street
left to rightacross the market
big picture to detailthe town, then one shop

3. Creating Mood

Language and mood
MoodWord choices
peacefulgentle, soft, slow, golden
tensesudden, sharp, shadows, silence
joyfulbright, dancing, laughter
lonelyempty, cold, distant

4. Model Description

The Harmattan had settled over Navrongo like a dusty blanket. The sun, pale as a groundnut, rose without warmth. Along the empty road, thorn trees stood bare, and the only sound was the slow creak of a donkey cart. Abu pulled his smock closer and walked on, his lips cracked, his breath small in the dry air.

Notice the simile "like a dusty blanket", and the local comparison "pale as a groundnut". The word "empty" and the "slow creak" create a lonely mood. Sensory details of touch, such as "cracked" lips, help the reader to feel the setting. Short and long sentences are balanced.

A dusty Harmattan morning in northern Ghana
Figure 4: Harmattan morning Describe your school at dawn in a set mood.

5. Using Setting Well

Setting can reflect a character's feelings. A storm may match anger, while a sunrise may suggest hope. This is called pathetic fallacy. Setting can also create conflict: a flood may trap a family, or a remote village may have no doctor. Good writers make setting work hard. In your composition, avoid beginning with "One day" or "Once upon a time". Instead, drop the reader into a place: "Rain hammered the zinc roof all night."

New words

setting
The time and place of a story.
pathetic fallacy
Weather that reflects feelings.
sensory detail
Description that uses the senses.

Summary

  • Setting includes time, place and mood.
  • Choose details and language to create a mood.

Exercises

Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.

  1. 1. Setting refers to…

    • A. time and place
    • B. the author
    • C. the price
    • D. the title
    Show answer
    Answer: time and placeTerm.
  2. 2. Weather can reflect a character's feelings.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: TruePathetic fallacy.
  3. 3. Weather reflecting feelings is pathetic ______.

    Show answer
    Answer: fallacyTerm.
  4. 4. Write an opening sentence set in the rain.

    Show answer
    Answer: Rain hammered the zinc roof all night.Opening.

Lesson 5

Strand
Literature
Sub-strand
Narrative
Indicator
B9.5.1.1.3 – Analyze the sequence of events across texts (narrative and play script)

Introduction

Writers do not always start at the beginning. Sometimes they start at the end, and then show you how it happened.

1. Chronological and Non-Chronological Order

Chronological order: Events told in the order in which they happened.

Many stories are told in chronological order. Others jump in time, in order to keep the reader interested. A writer may begin with a dramatic moment, then go back to explain what led to it. A play may reveal past events through a character's speech, or through a scene set in the past. Understanding the order of events helps you to follow the plot and see why the writer told it that way.

2. Techniques of Time

Time techniques
TechniqueMeaningExample
flashbackgoing back to an earlier timeShe remembered the day her father left.
foreshadowinghinting at what will happenHe did not know it would be the last time.
in medias resbeginning in the middle of the action"Run!" she shouted.
flash-forwardjumping aheadTen years later, he would return.

3. Comparing Two Texts

Sequence across texts
FeatureStoryPlay
openinga flashback by the narratora character telling her story
middlea problem growsconflict in dialogue
climaxa discoverya confrontation on stage
endingquiet reflectiona final scene

Comparing texts shows how sequence affects meaning. In a story, a narrator can jump between events with ease. In a play, time changes are shown by scene breaks, lighting or dialogue. Both forms use suspense to make the audience want to know what happens next.

A theatre stage with lights
Figure 5: Theatre stage Rewrite a story opening to begin in the middle of the action.

4. Building Suspense

Suspense is a feeling of anxious waiting. Writers build it by delaying information, using short sentences and adding warning signs. Foreshadowing makes us worry: "If only he had listened to his mother." Cliffhangers end a chapter or scene at an exciting moment. Ananse stories keep listeners guessing about how the trickster will escape.

Identifying technique

"As she packed the bag, Ama thought of the night the river had taken their house." What technique is used?

  1. She is in the present, packing a bag.
  2. The thought goes back to an earlier night.

Answer: Flashback

In your own stories, try one of these techniques, but keep it clear. Use tense changes and time phrases such as "Years before," so that your reader does not get lost.

New words

flashback
A move back to an earlier time.
foreshadowing
A hint of what will come.
suspense
A feeling of anxious waiting.

Summary

  • Writers may tell events in or out of order.
  • Flashback, foreshadowing and cliffhangers create suspense.

Exercises

Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.

  1. 1. A move to an earlier time is a…

    • A. flashback
    • B. simile
    • C. chorus
    • D. stanza
    Show answer
    Answer: flashbackTime.
  2. 2. Foreshadowing hints at future events.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: TrueHint.
  3. 3. A feeling of anxious waiting is ______.

    Show answer
    Answer: suspenseTerm.
  4. 4. Give an example of foreshadowing.

    Show answer
    Answer: He did not know it would be the last time he saw her.Hint.

Homework

  1. Write the opening of a story that begins in the middle of the action.
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