Basic 8 · English Language
Giving Instructions, Assessing Fluency, Inference Questions, Adjective Phrases and Revising Narratives
In this topic you will give and follow instructions and directions, assess your own reading fluency, answer inference and evaluation questions, use adjective phrases and revise and edit your personal narrative.
By the end of these notes you should be able to:
- Give clear instructions and directions in sequence
- Assess and improve reading fluency
- Answer inference and evaluation questions with evidence
- Use adjective phrases and clauses
- Revise and edit a personal narrative
What you already know
- Directions (Basic 7)
- Reading fluency, drafting narratives
Copy everything that has a blue line on its left into your notebook. The other parts are for reading.
Lesson 1
- Strand
- Oral Language
- Sub-strand
- Conversation and Everyday Discourse
- Indicator
- B8.1.1.1.4 – Listen to and give accurate directions of complex routes to different locations
Introduction
"Press the green button, wait for the beep, then enter your PIN." Clear instructions help people use machines, cook meals and find places.
1. Instructions and Directions
Instructions tell someone how to do something. Directions tell someone how to get somewhere. Both must be clear, in the right order and complete. Both usually use imperative verbs: "Turn", "Press", "Mix", "Walk".
2. Giving Clear Instructions
| Feature | Example |
|---|---|
| one step at a time | "First, open the app. Next, enter the amount." |
| imperative verbs | "Press", "Choose", "Confirm" |
| sequence words | first, next, then, after that, finally |
| exact details | "Press 1 for Send Money." |
| warnings | "Do not share your PIN." |
3. Using a Map
With a map, give directions using landmarks and compass points: "From the post office, walk north along Station Road. Turn right at the Total filling station, pass the Methodist church on your left and continue for two hundred metres. The clinic is the blue building opposite the bank." Check that your listener can follow by asking them to repeat the main points.
4. Following Instructions
Listen to or read all the steps before you start. Ask questions if something is unclear. Do each step in order and check the result. In examinations, follow instructions exactly: if a question says "Answer any three", answering four wastes time. Reading instructions carefully is a skill that saves marks.
5. Instructions in Daily Life
Instructions are all around us: mobile money menus, medicine labels, recipes, exam papers and road signs. A mistake in following them can be costly or dangerous. For example, medicine labels tell you how much to take and when, so read them carefully or ask a pharmacist. Writing clear instructions is also a valuable job skill in many careers.
New words
- instruction
- A statement telling how to do something.
- imperative
- A verb form that gives a command.
- landmark
- An easily seen building or feature.
Summary
- Instructions and directions must be clear, ordered and complete, using imperative verbs.
- Use sequence words, landmarks and warnings, and listen fully before acting.
Exercises
Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.
1. Which is an imperative verb?
- A. Press
- B. Pressing
- C. Pressed
- D. Presses
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Answer: PressCommand.2. Read all the steps before you start.
- A. True
- B. False
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Answer: TrueGood habit.3. An easily seen building used for directions is a ______.
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Answer: landmarkGuide point.4. Write three instructions for making tea.
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Answer: Boil water. Put a tea bag in a cup. Pour in the water and add sugar.Sequence.
Lesson 2
- Strand
- Literature
- Sub-strand
- Prose
- Indicator
- B8.5.1.1.3 – Read prose fluently and with understanding
Introduction
You cannot improve what you do not measure. Simple checks show how your reading is developing.
1. Words Correct per Minute
Words correct per minute (WCPM): The number of words a reader reads correctly in one minute.
- Choose a passage of about 200 words that you have not practised.
- Ask a partner to time you for one minute.
- Your partner marks each word you read incorrectly.
- Count the words read, then subtract the errors.
- Record the result in your reading log.
Calculate WCPM
Ama read 145 words in one minute and made 5 errors. What is her WCPM?
- Words read: 145.
- Errors: 5.
- 145 − 5 = 140.
Answer: 140 words correct per minute
2. A Fluency Rubric
| Score | Description |
|---|---|
| 1 | reads word by word, with no expression |
| 2 | reads in short groups, with little expression |
| 3 | reads in phrases, with some expression |
| 4 | reads smoothly, with expression that fits the meaning |
3. Practice Plan
Read aloud for ten minutes each day. Repeat one passage three or four times until it flows. Listen to good readers on the radio or from teachers. Choose texts at a suitable level: not too hard, not too easy. Check your WCPM every two weeks and look for steady growth.
4. Speed with Understanding
Fluency should not be measured by speed alone. After reading, retell the passage or answer questions. If you read quickly but cannot retell what you read, slow down. The aim is to read at a comfortable speed while understanding well.
5. Choosing What to Read
Fluency grows when you enjoy reading. Choose stories, newspapers, magazines and religious texts that interest you. Borrow books from the school or community library and swap with friends. Even ten minutes of reading on a phone, if the text is good, adds up over a year to thousands of pages.
New words
- WCPM
- Words correct per minute.
- reading log
- A record of reading practice.
- rubric
- A guide for scoring work.
Summary
- WCPM measures accuracy and rate, while a rubric scores expression and phrasing.
- Daily practice and regular checks build fluency, but understanding must come first.
Exercises
Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.
1. Kofi read 120 words with 4 errors. His WCPM is…
- A. 116
- B. 124
- C. 120
- D. 4
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Answer: 116Subtract errors.2. Fluency is measured by speed alone.
- A. True
- B. False
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Answer: FalseUnderstanding matters.3. A guide for scoring work is a ______.
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Answer: rubricScoring.4. State two ways of improving fluency.
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Answer: Read aloud daily and repeat passages (or listen to good readers).Any two.
Lesson 3
- Strand
- Reading
- Sub-strand
- Comprehension
- Indicator
- B8.2.1.1.3 – Generate and answer questions to increase confidence and independent reading through a variety of non- fiction texts
Introduction
The hardest comprehension questions ask you to work out what is not stated, or to judge what is. These are inference and evaluation questions.
1. Inference
Inference: A conclusion reached from evidence in the text and your own knowledge.
The formula is: text clues + what I know = inference. If a passage says "She wiped her eyes and looked away", you can infer that she is crying or sad, although the writer does not say so.
2. Reading Passage: The Letter
Every evening, Mr Tetteh walked to the post office, though it closed at five and he always arrived at a quarter past. He would stand at the locked door for a moment, then touch the brass handle and walk home.
The new clerk finally asked the old watchman about him. "Before you came," the watchman said, "his son went to work overseas. He promised to write. That was eleven years ago."
3. Answering Inference Questions
| Question | Evidence | Inference |
|---|---|---|
| How does Mr Tetteh feel? | he goes every evening and touches the handle | lonely, hopeful, missing his son |
| Why does he come after closing? | he knows no letter will come | it has become a ritual of hope |
| Has his son written? | "That was eleven years ago" | no, probably not |
4. Evaluation Questions
Evaluation questions ask for your judgement: "Do you think Mr Tetteh should stop going?", "Was the son right?" There may be no single correct answer, but you must give reasons based on the text. Use this pattern: state your view, give evidence from the text and explain the link. Answer in complete sentences and do not simply copy from the passage.
New words
- inference
- A conclusion drawn from evidence.
- evaluate
- To make a judgement.
- evidence
- Details from a text that support an idea.
Summary
- Inference combines text clues with your own knowledge.
- Evaluation answers give a view supported by evidence and explanation.
Exercises
Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.
1. How does Mr Tetteh probably feel?
- A. lonely
- B. angry
- C. excited
- D. bored
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Answer: lonelyInference.2. The passage says directly that Mr Tetteh is sad.
- A. True
- B. False
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Answer: FalseWe infer it.3. A conclusion drawn from evidence is an ______.
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Answer: inferenceReasoned guess.4. Why do you think he touches the handle?
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Answer: It shows his hope and longing, as if he is greeting the place that might bring news of his son.Inference.
Lesson 4
- Strand
- Grammar
- Sub-strand
- Adjectives
- Indicator
- B8.3.1.1.3 – Demonstrate command of the use of adjectives in discourse
Introduction
A single adjective describes a noun. A group of words can do the same job with much more detail.
1. Adjective Phrases
Adjective phrase: A group of words without a verb that describes a noun.
An adjective phrase may be built around an adjective, as in "very tall and thin", or begin with a preposition, as in "the girl with the red bag" and "a man of great courage". These prepositional phrases tell us which one or what kind.
2. Adjective Clauses
An adjective clause has a subject and a verb and describes a noun. It is the same as a relative clause: "the girl who has a red bag". Writers choose a phrase or clause depending on length and style.
| Form | Example |
|---|---|
| adjective | a brave farmer |
| adjective phrase | a farmer of great courage |
| adjective clause | a farmer who showed great courage |
3. Using Participle Phrases
Phrases that begin with -ing or -ed forms can also describe nouns: "Carrying a heavy basket, the woman climbed the hill." "Exhausted by the journey, the travellers slept." The phrase must sit close to the noun it describes. "Walking to school, the rain soaked me" is wrong, because the rain was not walking. Correct it: "Walking to school, I got soaked by the rain."
4. Expanding Sentences
Expand a sentence
Expand "The boy ran" with adjective phrases.
- Add a phrase after the noun: The boy in the torn shirt ran.
- Add a participle phrase: Clutching his bag, the boy in the torn shirt ran.
- Add a clause: Clutching his bag, the boy in the torn shirt, who had missed the bus, ran.
Answer: Clutching his bag, the boy in the torn shirt, who had missed the bus, ran.
New words
- adjective phrase
- A group of words without a verb describing a noun.
- adjective clause
- A clause describing a noun.
- participle phrase
- A phrase beginning with an -ing or -ed verb form.
Summary
- Adjective phrases and clauses add detail to nouns.
- Participle phrases must sit close to the noun they describe.
Exercises
Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.
1. Which is an adjective phrase?
- A. with the red bag
- B. quickly
- C. he ran
- D. and then
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Answer: with the red bagDescribes a noun.2. "Walking to school, the rain soaked me" is correct.
- A. True
- B. False
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Answer: FalseThe rain was not walking.3. A clause that describes a noun is an ______ clause.
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Answer: adjectiveRelative clause.4. Correct: "Running for the bus, my phone fell."
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Answer: Running for the bus, I dropped my phone.Placement.
Lesson 5
- Strand
- Writing
- Sub-strand
- Narrative Writing
- Indicator
- B8.4.2.1.1 – Write personal narratives using effective techniques incorporating descriptive details and logical event sequences
Introduction
Revising improves your ideas and organisation. Editing corrects grammar, spelling and punctuation. Good writers do both.
1. Revising
| Question | What to do if not |
|---|---|
| Does the opening grab attention? | start closer to the action |
| Are events clear and in order? | add time words or rearrange paragraphs |
| Is there a clear climax? | build tension and slow down at that moment |
| Are there sensory details? | add sights, sounds and smells |
| Is there dialogue? | add a few lines at key moments |
| Does the ending show what I learned? | add a reflection |
2. Editing
| Area | Check |
|---|---|
| tense | consistent past tense |
| punctuation | full stops, commas, quotation marks |
| spelling | especially difficult words |
| grammar | subject-verb agreement, pronouns |
| paragraphs | a new paragraph for each new idea or speaker |
3. Peer Review
Exchange drafts with a partner. Read the narrative aloud and tell the writer which part you liked most, where you were confused and one suggestion. Use the sentence starters "I enjoyed...", "I was not sure..." and "You could try...". Do not rewrite your partner's work; the choices belong to the writer.
4. Before and After
Before: "I went to the market and I was lost and I cried and a woman helped me." After: "I had lost my aunt. Tears ran down my face as the crowd pushed past. Then a woman selling tomatoes knelt beside me. 'Don't cry, my child,' she said. 'Let us find her.'" The second version breaks the long sentence, adds details and uses dialogue.
5. The Final Copy
After revising and editing, write or type a neat final copy. Check it one last time, reading it aloud. Give it a title that attracts interest. Your finished narrative can be shared with the class or kept in a portfolio.
New words
- revise
- To improve ideas and organisation.
- edit
- To correct mistakes in language.
- peer review
- Feedback from a classmate.
Summary
- Revising improves ideas and structure; editing corrects language.
- Peer review and reading aloud help you produce a strong final copy.
Exercises
Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.
1. Correcting spelling and punctuation is…
- A. editing
- B. drafting
- C. planning
- D. reciting
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Answer: editingLanguage.2. Revising can involve adding details.
- A. True
- B. False
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Answer: TrueImproving ideas.3. Feedback from a classmate is peer ______.
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Answer: reviewExchange.4. Correct: "Yesterday I go to the market and buy a fish."
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Answer: Yesterday I went to the market and bought a fish.Tense.
Homework
- Write clear directions from your home to your school.
- Measure your WCPM and record it.
- Write the final copy of your personal narrative.