Basic 2 · Creative Arts · Appreciating and Appraising

Giving Views and Improving Artworks

In this topic you will share your views about displayed artworks and suggest how to improve them.

By the end of these notes you should be able to:

  • Report your views about artworks
  • Suggest ways to improve an artwork
  • Improve your own artwork

What you already know

  • Guidelines for viewing art

Copy everything that has a blue line on its left into your notebook. The other parts are for reading.

Strand
Visual Arts & Performing Arts
Sub-strand
Appreciating and Appraising
Indicator
B2.1.4.6.1 – Report own views and feelings about the displayed artworks and suggest how the artworks can be modified or improved

Introduction

After Clean Ghana Day, the class talks about what went well and what can be better next time.

1. Reporting Views

Sentence starters
PurposeSentence starter
say what you like"I like the … because …"
say how it makes you feel"It makes me feel …"
suggest an improvement"It would be better if …"

2. Improving an Artwork

  • add more colour
  • make the message bigger and clearer
  • fix loose pieces with more glue
  • add a title and label
A poster before and after improvement
Figure 1: Improving an artwork Draw one artwork and show how you would improve it.Illustration: Sirbus

New words

view
What you think about something.
modify
To change something a little.
suggestion
An idea to help.
appraise
To judge the quality of something.

Summary

  • We report views using kind sentence starters.
  • We suggest ways to improve artworks.
  • Improving our work helps us grow as artists.

Class activity: Improve It

  1. Choose your own artwork.
  2. Listen to one suggestion from a classmate.
  3. Make one change to improve it.

You need: Learners’ own artworks, Locally made drum, Locally made appraisal cards

Exercises

Answer in your exercise book first, then check your answers.

  1. 1. Which is a kind suggestion?

    • A. "It would be better with bigger words."
    • B. "It is rubbish."
    • C. "Throw it away."
    • D. "I hate it."
    Show answer
    Answer: "It would be better with bigger words."It helps without hurting.
  2. 2. To change something a little is to…

    • A. Modify
    • B. Destroy
    • C. Copy
    • D. Hide
    Show answer
    Answer: ModifyModify means change slightly.
  3. 3. Artists can improve their work.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: TruePractice makes work better.
  4. 4. We should only say bad things about art.

    • A. True
    • B. False
    Show answer
    Answer: FalseStart with what is good.
  5. 5. What you think about something is your ______.

    Show answer
    Answer: viewThat is a view.
  6. 6. Write a sentence suggesting how to improve a poster.

    Show answer
    Answer: E.g. It would be better if the colours were brighter.Use "It would be better if…".

Homework

  1. Improve one artwork at home and show it to your family.